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I will not give up, vent by TheBlazingEmber I will not give up, vent by TheBlazingEmber
"I can feel your blood when i strike
but when you strike me no blood
comes out but i can still feel the pain
you give me, forever i will fight no matter
how much invisible blood you spill."

oh wow way to make it sound emo blaze o.o
it's a poem i put together with this poem i got some depressing news for a family member and so i'm still sad about it.
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Pros:
The way you did the mouth is amazing. I have trouble doing that so I'm jealous
the glowing effect is awesome
the blood on the claws isn't bad, its just too light a color
the anatomy is pretty good i have to say

Cons:
Background is just black. Kinda boring.
You could add more blood, but im usually overdramatic with blood
i have trouble seeing the cat cuz its a dark color and u used dark shading and a black background (but i use a MAC so that might just be me)
and again, the blood is too light of a color
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Good things : The glow really brights the picture and the light and shading is really,really good. I really love how you did the saliva,and the way the mouth opens. I have difficulties doing that myself. The claws are really well drawn also, they are well 'unleashed' of Sky's paws.

'Bad things' : First of all, the head is too small. Look at the chest,and look back at the head. Cats usually have bigger heads than chest, including the face you mentionned that she was fox-sized,wich is a bigger reason to make the head bigger. The front arms should be less long,because naturally they are the same size. if you would put the two first straight,you would nodice they are too long. The background should be another color,since Sky's already dark,and it's not always easy to see her with any computer screens. And there should be blood, bloody claws must have a reason to be there,and if it was her, maybe a bit near the mouth or on it.
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justinjamal Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
I love it
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TheBlazingEmber Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks ^.^
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justinjamal Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Your welcome
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TheBlazingEmber Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconsweethugplz:
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justinjamal Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
Your welcome
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